The table and charts provide information about destinations and employment of UK first degree holders.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main featuresç and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts provide information about destinations and employment of UK first degree holders.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main featuresç and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table shows the destinations of UK graduates in 4 sequential academic years (%),
whereas
the accompanying charts illustrate salary bands for 10 graduates in
employment
in 2009.
Overall
, it is evident that in 2007, full-time
employment
was responsible for the highest in whole years,
on the other hand
, in terms of salary, the proportion of genders who earned more than $40.000 was equal. Close inspection of the table reveals that full-time
employment
experienced a slight fluctuation and reached 63% in 2010.part-time
employment
and study ranged between 7% and 9% with similar patterns to
further
study only and not employed, fluctuating between 16% and 18% compared to 11% and 15% respectively. Turning to the pie-charts, female students took the lead in the salary bands between 20.000 and 24.900 with 32%,
while
men male students were at 26%. A ratio for workers earning more than $40.000 was equal in both sexes, at 29%.
Furthermore
, the people with wages 35.000-40.000 and 5.000-9.000 stood at
last
with a margin of 1-2%.
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