The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.

The given charts depict two different ways of protection for homes which are at risk of being flooded, and both of the houses are

rised

Correct your spelling

raised

above ground level. The main difference between the two protection plans is whether there is a stopbank or not In the first diagram, the function of a stopbank as a barrier against flooding from nearby rivers is illustrated.

This

barrier, depicted as a mound near a drain/river, exceeds the predicted height of a 100-year flood.

Additionally

, the houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding

form

Correct your spelling

from

show examples

rainwater, and there is a floodgate beneath the stopbank opened to allow the internal

oinding

Correct your spelling

winding

to drain

offf

Correct your spelling

off

in to

Join the words

into

show examples

the river.

In contrast

, the second illustration portrays the dire consequences of a house lacking

such

protection, directly exposed to overflowing water. In

this

case,

building

Fix the agreement mistake

buildings

show examples

are

also

raied

Correct your spelling

raised

rated

on stilts. The

hight

Correct your spelling

height

show examples

of the stilts is 300mm above the 100-year flood level which is called freeboard.

This

measurement can secure the house

again

Correct your spelling

against

show examples

the flood.

Submitted by haomengyue on Mon Apr 01 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "depict" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

168 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
There are various cultures in the world, in some cultures younger people are often encouraged if they work hard they can gain anything. This behavior can give positive and negative impacts to children's development and I will explain in this essay.
4
band
It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Many professionals struggle to find enough time to spend with their family and friends together with doing their work on proper way, this is because of many reasons one off them is poor time management which an be solved by creating a time table to stay organized and do not miss out the family important days.
4
band
Some countries are struggling with increasing crime rates. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Presently, due to the increasing crime rate, numerous countries are struggling with it. Furthermore, numerous of individauls believe that the only way to sovle thie solution is to incresing the numver of police. From my prespective, I disagree with this aforementioned statement as it also could solve by improving the law, and instralling the a CCTV.
7.5
band
Some people think that children should be educated at school about paying taxes and personal budgeting Others think that parents should teach these things
In this present world, the knowledge of finances plays an important role in the future of Children. The controversy that pupils should be educated at school or by their parents, is a dispute that is both agreed upon and disagreed with by many. The two sides of this argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
4
band
Task 1 Academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Food is a topic that generally involves a lot of sides that can be made in different ways, like fish that can be fried, steamed, or eaten when it's raw. As might be expected, people have invented smoked fish. is a method of curing fish through smoking. To begin, to cure a fish, you must first find a fish, which can be quickly found in the ocean, but the technical limitations of a small boat make it impossible to preserve fish with high impact; additionally, we transport all of the fish we catch to the port, where they will be kept in good condition at a low temperature. The second step is cleaning it with fresh water, cutting open the head, and storing it in salt water. The third method is to cure it with smoke. after all steps of liquid brine or dry salt mixture), cold smoking, cooling, packaging (air, vacuum, or modified), and storage. Smoking, one of the oldest preservation methods, combines the effects of salting, drying, heating, and smoking. Lastly, distribute it to fish shop...

The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Some countries are struggling with increasing crime rates. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that children should be educated at school about paying taxes and personal budgeting Others think that parents should teach these things

Task 1 Academic Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.