The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.

The given charts depict two different ways of protection for homes which are at risk of being flooded, and both of the houses are

rised

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raised

above ground level. The main difference between the two protection plans is whether there is a stopbank or not In the first diagram, the function of a stopbank as a barrier against flooding from nearby rivers is illustrated.

This

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barrier, depicted as a mound near a drain/river, exceeds the predicted height of a 100-year flood.

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, the houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding

form

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from

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rainwater, and there is a floodgate beneath the stopbank opened to allow the internal

oinding

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winding

to drain

offf

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off

in to

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the river.

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, the second illustration portrays the dire consequences of a house lacking

such

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protection, directly exposed to overflowing water. In

this

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case,

building

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buildings

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are

also

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raied

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raised

rated

on stilts. The

hight

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height

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of the stilts is 300mm above the 100-year flood level which is called freeboard.

This

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measurement can secure the house

again

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against

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the flood.

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Apr 1, 2024

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