The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.

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The given charts depict two different ways of protection for homes which are at risk of being flooded, and both of the houses are

rised

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raised

above ground level. The main difference between the two protection plans is whether there is a stopbank or not In the first diagram, the function of a stopbank as a barrier against flooding from nearby rivers is illustrated.

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barrier, depicted as a mound near a drain/river, exceeds the predicted height of a 100-year flood.

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, the houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding

form

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from

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rainwater, and there is a floodgate beneath the stopbank opened to allow the internal

oinding

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winding

to drain

offf

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off

in to

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the river.

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, the second illustration portrays the dire consequences of a house lacking

such

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protection, directly exposed to overflowing water. In

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case,

building

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are

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raied

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raised

rated

on stilts. The

hight

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height

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of the stilts is 300mm above the 100-year flood level which is called freeboard.

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measurement can secure the house

again

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against

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the flood.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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168 words

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