The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012.
The bar chart presented the comparison of sports
activities
played by male
and females in an English town in 2012. Sports including tennis, badminton, cycling, swimming, football, and history are held. In terms of general preference, Fix the agreement mistake
males
overall
boys tend to enjoy physical activities
more than girls. However
, girls are also
fond of activities
such
as badminton and swimming.
The amount
of people entertained by swimming Change the quantifier
number
are
above Change the verb form
is
than
the rest of the physical Change preposition
apply
activities
while
the number of love hockey is lower. Furthermore
, tennis had the same quantity as the
swimming. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, the number of males Correct pronoun usage
who likes
likes
football Correct subject-verb agreement
like
are
higher than the rest of the physical activity. Meanwhile, hockey had the least amount of people.Change the verb form
is
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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