The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram explains the way in which

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recycled.

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,what stands out from the picture is that the recycling process of

aluminium

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cans

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is a cyclical process that consists of several main stages,including use,collection,cleaning,sorting,compressing,heating and melting,rolling,recycling and reusing. First of all,after

aluminium

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cans

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are used by consumers,they are discarded in recycling bins

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for

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cans

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only,waiting for trucks to transport them to

recycling

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centre.Once there,

cans

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are cleaned to remove any residue after which they are sorted and those that can be reused are shredded and compressed .Once

compressing

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the compressing

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step is over,these

cans

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melting stage,where they are heated in high

tempratures

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.After that,melted

cans

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are rolled and their thickness varies between 2.5 mm and 6 mm.

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,they are recycled and

three quarter

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of all

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become available for customers.After they are reused,they go through the recycling process all over again.