On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it, tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to ask you to compensate lose
of my watch that I bought Replace the word
loss
it
from Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct article usage
the apple
apple
store in Capitalize word
Apple
Dubia
. Two days ago, I came back home after Correct your spelling
Dubai
nice
trip. Add an article
a nice
Whearas
, I Correct your spelling
Whereas
planed
to use my new watch in the Correct your spelling
planned
metting
. Correct your spelling
meeting
How ever
, I checked my bag and I could not find it.I fill the form on your website and Correct your spelling
However
claim
about my watch. Wrong verb form
claimed
Although
, I have the barcode and the box of the wath
that show the price of it.
I Correct your spelling
watch
didnot
use Correct your spelling
did not
didn't
this
watch more
than two days. So, I need your Change preposition
for more
experince
to judge Correct your spelling
experience
about
Change preposition
apply
this
matter any
pay Correct your spelling
and
full
refund.
Correct article usage
a full
on the other
hand
I pay full Add a comma
hand,
taravel
insurance to Correct your spelling
travel
be protect
me from any danger.Change the verb form
protect
Finally
,I want you to do any work immediatly
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as Correct your spelling
immediately
posible
.
yours sincerely
AmirCorrect your spelling
possible
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Spelling Mistakes
Try to proofread your letter for spelling errors, such as 'lose' instead of 'loss,' 'Dubia' instead of 'Dubai,' 'whearas' instead of 'whereas,' 'metting' instead of 'meeting,' 'how ever' should be 'however,' 'I fill' should be 'I filled,' 'wath' instead of 'watch,' 'didnot' should be 'did not,' 'taravel' instead of 'travel,' and 'any' instead of 'and' in 'any pay full refund.' Correct spelling is critical for clear communication.
Sentence Structure
Improve your sentence structure for clarity. For example, 'I am writing this letter to ask you to compensate lose of my watch' could be 'I am writing to request compensation for my lost watch.' Clear and correct sentences help your reader understand your message.
Punctuation
Use proper punctuation to enhance readability. For instance, 'How ever,' should simply be 'However,' without the need for a comma when starting a new sentence.
Paragraph Structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better coherence. The second paragraph mixes several ideas which could be more clearly separated or connected.
Politeness and Clarity
To make your request clear and polite, consider rephrasing sentences like 'So, I need your experince to judge about this matter any pay full refund.' to 'Therefore, I kindly request a full refund for the watch.'
Task Achievement
You have clearly stated your main request—compensation for the lost watch, which directly addresses the task.
Structure
The letter is structured with a clear beginning, body, and conclusion which aids understanding.
Tone
Your polite tone, beginning with 'Dear sir,' and sign-off 'yours sincerely' are appropriate for the context of the letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.