The chart give information about the proportion of boys and girls of a shcool who achieved high grades( A or B+) in respective courses.
The charts show the changes in the performance of
boys
and girls
in different subjects in 1996 and 2000.
Over 42% of boys
achieved a high grade in Humanities in 2000, up from 21%. The proportion
of girls
who achieved this
standard in this
subject was lower at 25% in 2000, although
it was 32% in 1996. Boys
also
improved their performance in the Arts significantly with the figure rising from 9% to 21%, while
the proportion
of high-achieving girls
dipped to 25%.
Girls
performed better than boys
in Languages, although
the percentage of top achievers declined from45
% to 30%. There were Correct your spelling
from 45
also
improvements in Science and Maths, in which the proportion
of girls
who achieved a good grade rose to 11% and 15% respectively. In contrast
, the figures for boys
in these two courses dropped.
Overall
, boys
outperformed girls
in Science and Maths, but the gap narrowed. While
a larger proportion
of boys
reached higher standards in the Arts, Humanities as well as
Languages, the figures for girls
saw a decline.Submitted by haomengyue on
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