The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the year 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs present the data on migration to the UK.
While
the line chart depicts the
duration
of stay in a period of 8
years
, starting from 2000, the pie chart indicates the purposes for migration in 2008.
Overall
, the number of immigrants experienced a gradual rise in all mentioned
duration
, except for the length of 4
years
and above, as it remained unchanged. Work and study were the most crucial aspects behind the migrating decision.
Firstly
, the intended
duration
of up to 2
years
was the highest among all, starting from 150 thousand immigrants
then
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stabilizing at 250 thousand from 2004 to 2008. The number of immigrants who planned to stay for 2-4
years
witnessed a light fluctuation between under and just above 50 thousand.
Lastly
, meanwhile starting at the same level of the aforementioned
duration
, above 4
years
remained unchanged in 8
years
. Regarding the reasons for migration in 2008, working and studying purposes ACCOUNTED FOR 38% and 32%, respectively. The proportion of people that came to resettle with their accompanies and families was 16%. The
last
two unclear aspects followed closely behind with 14%, divided equally for other purposes and reasons not being stated.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words duration, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immigrate
  • emigrate
  • migration
  • immigrant
  • intended length of stay
  • short-term stay
  • long-term stay
  • trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • primary reasons
  • comparative analysis
  • contributing factors
  • data interpretation
  • work-related migration
  • study-related migration
  • family reunification
  • asylum seeking
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