The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevent.
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The modifications that will be made to the industrial area in the town of Norbiton as depicted
by
the given picture chart. The information is calibrated in the form of pictorial representation.
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in
Overall
, the most striking feature of the chart is that the area of factories will undergo several changes in the coming time period and a lot of developments will be noticed.
Taking a cursory glance, it can be manifested that in the upcoming plan
new roads will be constructed from the Add a comma
plan,
round-about
to the north and north-west Correct your spelling
roundabout
direction
whereas
all the factories will be demolished to built
new houses. Change the form of the verb
build
Furthermore
, a new smaller round-about
will Correct your spelling
roundabout
establish
below the older one and near to it the establishment of Wrong verb form
be established
medical
centre will take place Correct article usage
a medical
to
the Change preposition
in
south-east
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southeast
direction
.
Moving to further
details, to
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direction
, construction
of shops will occur near the bigger circular path. Correct article usage
the construction
However
, the one factory to the east direction
will be replaced by the school and near to
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apply
this
school will be a playground to the north-east direction
for children to play.Submitted by navkiranji on
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