The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor degree and the table gives information on the payment of the anthropology graduates after working for 5 years.

The pie chart illustrates several destinations of anthropology alumni from one university after they finished their bachelor degree and the table gives information on the payment of the anthropology  graduates after working for 5 years.
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The pie chart shows the destinations of anthropology students from one university.
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, it is seen that a significant rate of students who go to full-time
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after graduating in anthropology and the salaries of government sector increase by 45% after five years, The majority of anthropology graduates
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in full-time occupations, at 52%. The second-highest figure is part-time
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. It is higher than the figure for combined part-time jobs plus postgraduate study and full-time postgraduate study. The proportion of unemployed people is 12%. With regard to salaries, the proportion of those who receive $25,000 to $49,999 was 5% in the categories for Freelance consultants and the government sector. In comparison, the rate of people who earned more than $100,000 as freelance consultants and
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government sector after five years of
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is 40% and 50%, respectively. In the case of private companies,
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they get higher salaries than other occupations in the first year of working, the rate of people earning more than $100,000 is 30%, which was the lowest among the three jobs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • bachelor's degree
  • anthropology alumni
  • employment sectors
  • salary ranges
  • academic roles
  • field research
  • public sector
  • non-profit organizations
  • private sector jobs
  • continuing education
  • job market trends
  • financial prospects
  • career progression
  • economic context
  • geographic location
  • cost of living
  • salary increases
  • experience
  • earning potential
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