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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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There is no doubt that these days people tend to enter subjects like business
as well as
 engineering The question is ; why students nowadays are not choosing subjects related to
science
? what are the reasons and the effects on society?
According to
 the causes of
this
problem
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problem,
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 students have a Wrong assumption the reason
given
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I support
this
 claim
indivaduals
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individuals
 usually think that
science
 is too hard to learn
furthermore
 it
required
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requires
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 intelligent people to study it,
for example
 chemistry major at Qassim
university
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University
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 is one of fewer majors that female don't like.
on the other hand
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there appeared
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appeared
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 to us effect
thus
 of the causes we
that
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apply
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have written about
it
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before,
moreover
 from my point of view
this
 generation our discoveries decline that cause of following issues, one example is engineering subjects need
science
 to develop ,
Ac
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 system is
clear
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 example, chemicals related to electrical batteries power, so that negative effecting on other majors make it a difficult to progress. In conclusion,
although
 decreasing the number of individuals who
is
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enter
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entering
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science
, people still attract some students who
loves
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 it,
therefore
 I believe that we should Keep progressing
that is
 why
world
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the world
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need
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 scientists.
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You’ve made an effort to address both parts of the question - discussing the reasons and the effects not choosing science subjects has on society.
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You have a good instinct for engaging with the topic and proposing interesting ideas, such as the critical role of science in other fields like engineering.

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