The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the

UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
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The bar chart provides a detailed breakdown of the proportions of daily
fruit
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and
vegetable
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consumption
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among UK citizens categorized by
children
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,
men
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, and women from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
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, it is apparent that women consistently had the highest proportion of
fruit
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and
vegetable
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consumption
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,
while
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children
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consistently had the lowest. The data reveals notable fluctuations and trends over the years. In 2001,
children
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accounted for only 13% of daily
fruit
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and
vegetable
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consumption
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,
while
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men
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comprised 18%. These figures remained relatively stagnant until 2003 before witnessing a gradual increase. By 2006,
men
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reached their peak
consumption
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rate at nearly 28%,
while
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children
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peaked slightly later in 2007 at 27%.
Subsequently
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, both groups experienced a minor decline, with
men
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and
children
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recording proportions of 27% and 24% respectively by the end of the period.
Conversely
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, women
initially
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represented approximately 28% of daily
fruit
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and
vegetable
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consumption
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, steadily increasing until 2006 when they reached a peak of 35%.
However
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, there was a sharp decline in 2007 to 31%, settling at 30% by 2008.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fruit, vegetable, consumption, children, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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