The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people who consumed five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the

UK over 8 years, which is from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart provides a detailed breakdown of the proportions of daily
fruit
and
vegetable
consumption
among UK citizens categorized by
children
,
men
, and women from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
, it is apparent that women consistently had the highest proportion of
fruit
and
vegetable
consumption
,
while
children
consistently had the lowest. The data reveals notable fluctuations and trends over the years. In 2001,
children
accounted for only 13% of daily
fruit
and
vegetable
consumption
,
while
men
comprised 18%. These figures remained relatively stagnant until 2003 before witnessing a gradual increase. By 2006,
men
reached their peak
consumption
rate at nearly 28%,
while
children
peaked slightly later in 2007 at 27%.
Subsequently
, both groups experienced a minor decline, with
men
and
children
recording proportions of 27% and 24% respectively by the end of the period.
Conversely
, women
initially
represented approximately 28% of daily
fruit
and
vegetable
consumption
, steadily increasing until 2006 when they reached a peak of 35%.
However
, there was a sharp decline in 2007 to 31%, settling at 30% by 2008.
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