The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country.
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give
us information about the daily consumption of each Change the verb form
gives
preson
in three categories Correct your spelling
person
whitin
a quarter starting from 1981. At first Correct your spelling
within
glance
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glance,
while
consumption of margarine and butter were starting
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started
at
1981, low fat and reduced spreads Change preposition
in
was starting
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1996.
Butter moved up slightly between 1981 and 1986 Change preposition
in
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margarine moved downward slowly.Submitted by k26840q on
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