The line graph below compares the number of British people commuting to work by car, bus or train everyday from 1970 to 2030.

The provided line graph gives us information about the number of British people commuting to work by three vehicles within a half-century starting from 1970. At first glance,

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trains

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and

cars

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went upward gradually, the number of

buses

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moved down slightly. Using a car and train to go to work increased steadily between 1970 and 2000 following 10 years

cars

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and

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stabilised which was the first and

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constant for

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and

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.

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, they climbed until 2030 and

trains

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reached the highest point just below 6,

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touched their peak at 9 million each year.

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buses

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started

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higher level when compared to the amount of

trains

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, the number of people who commute to work by bus reduced gradually from 1970 to 2030 and in 2030

buses

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saw their lowest point at just above 3.