The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The pie graphs detail the comparison of six different items'
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an overall
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TV
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, after ten years the proportion made up only 4%, what
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In contrast
, using Flat-screen TV
became much more popular after Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
initial
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chose
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made up one-twentieth, but in 2019, it rose by around four times, and was the third in that year. The sum of the Conventional Replace the word
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TV
and of the Laptops or desktop computer
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computers
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not
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to figures of Tablets.
In 2009, the gap between Desktop computers and Laptops Change the word
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were
2%. Surprisingly, after ten years their rates caught up Change the verb form
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others
, and it was 12% respectively.Change to a singular noun
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