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A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter •tell them who you are and where you live; •explain the nature of your complaint; •say what you would like them to do about it.

#road #home #town #city #council #•tell #•explain #nature #complaint #•say
Dear Sir / Madam First of all, I hope my mail finds you in
a
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good health,
Socend
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Second
 thing, please allow me to thank you, and your team, for making our city light and bright, but today, I am writing
this
 message to
complaint
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 about 2
roads
, which are close to my home, Actually people who
lives
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 here suffering, because of the bad condition of
roads
. My name is Alex, I am 30 years old, living in 22nd
sreet
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street
,
Brigton
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Brighton
 town, London.
Although
 your team are worked
last
 month in
this
 area,
but
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the job still not finished yet, so the
roads
,
what
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 I mentioned already are not good for drivers, and it
maybe
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cause
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 problems in future, In
additional
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, residents tend to write
same
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 letter to your council, and the main idea is
prepare
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to prepare
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 the streets
,
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 and make it them good for use.
Moreover
, we need you to
studay
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study
 our request to
coloring
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 the new
roads
, and
also
 to put traffic
singnal
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signal
signals
, to avoid any accidents in
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 stage.
Finaly
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Finally
, I would like you to take
this
 subject seriously, and
make
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 action as soon as possible. Wish you all the best Best regards.
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structure
Consider using a clear introductory paragraph that succinctly states the purpose of your letter.
clarity
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single point or idea to enhance clarity.
grammar and punctuation
Be attentive to spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Correct usage will significantly improve the quality of your writing.
task response
The letter politely introduces the issue and mentions what the writer would like to be done, adhering to the task requirements.
greeting and closing
Appropriate closing and sign-off show respect and formality.

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