The diagrams below show two hostel rooms that can be occupied by several people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams below show two hostel rooms that can be occupied by several people.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The
two
given diagrams describe
two
types of hostel rooms which specific numbers of
people
can
use
.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that
maximum
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a maximum
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two
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of two
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people
can
use
the
room
of
type
A
with
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for
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$50 per night.
In contrast
,
type
Correct article usage
a type
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B
room
can be occupied by four
people
, which can accept more
people
than
type
Correct article usage
a type
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A
room
, with $90 per night. As
type
B
can accept
two
people
more than
type
A
room
, it is shown that
type
B
room
costs $40/per night more than
type
A
room
. In detail,
type
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a type
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A
room
has
two
single beds
which
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on which
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two
people
can sleep. Next to single beds,
small
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a small
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closet and
bathroom
is
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are
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placed. At the margin of the top right, there is a sink
so
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apply
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that visitors can
use
as a kitchen. As soon as entering the
type
A
room
, visitors are able to
use
stairs
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the stairs
show examples
on the right. Turning to
type
Correct article usage
the type
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B
room
, there
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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more
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
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than
type
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in type
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A
room
such
as
sofa
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a sofa
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, TV, table in the middle of the
room
and refrigerator at the margin of the top left, respectively. As soon as entering the
room
,
sink
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the sink
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is placed in the straight and there is
bathroom
Add an article
a bathroom
the bathroom
show examples
on the right. There is a closet between
bathroom
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the bathroom
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and
two
bunk beds which 4 customers can sleep. There is a
bathroom
next to bookshelves, which
type
A
room
does not have.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, people, use, room, type, b, bathroom with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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