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Internet is an important part of our lives and we cannot imagine our job or studies without it. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?

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With the help of technology, the world has come a long way . The Internet plays a part and parcel role in our lives. We can't even imagine a day without the internet. We rely on the internet so much that we can not imagine our jobs or studies without it . Some communities are a bit concerned that it has some negative impacts
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 positive impacts In the succeeding monograph , I intend to delve into the rationale for both beliefs
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 proffer justification for my assertion .
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Introduction
Start by clearly stating the advantages and disadvantages of the internet in your introduction to give the reader a clear idea of what to expect in your essay.
Structure
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, one for advantages and another for disadvantages, to improve clarity and cohesion.
Content
Provide specific examples to support your claims about the advantages and disadvantages of the internet. This will make your arguments more convincing.
Conclusion
Conclude your essay by summarizing the advantages and disadvantages discussed and then offer your final opinion or a possible solution to mitigate the negative impacts.
Tone
You set a positive tone for the importance of the internet in our lives, which is good to engage the reader.
Balance
You acknowledge both sides of the argument (positive and negative impacts), which is key for a balanced essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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