Many city centers these days have traffic flow problems, causing congestion and pollution. One solution is to build fast ring roads on the outskirts of a city, taking traffic away from the centre. While this is helpful in some ways, it also causes new problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

think that

problem

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with

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of

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traffic jams in the city

centers

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centres

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should be solved by developing

fast

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the fast

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ring

roads

industry in the suburbs.

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essay totally disagrees with

this

statement. Personally, I believe that ring

roads

are not only the main

sourse

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source

of continuous noise and air pollution,

in addition

, it is a serious problem for the lifestyle of pedestrians and cyclists of that area. At

first,

building

of

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this

type of

roads systems

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road system

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are

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more often provided by cutting down the forests and destroying environmentally significant landscapes.

Such

areas produce a major amount of oxygen and are crucial for the health of local residents.

Furthermore

, the ability to travel faster by private car discourages

people

from using

the

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public transport, which causes far less air pollution by transporting more

people

by one bus or tram.

In addition

,

existence

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of ring

roads

has a negative impact

to

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pedestrians and cyclists.

For example

, when we

had travelling

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to Dubai city with my immediate family

last

year,

instead

of walking down the streets, we had to get a taxi even for a tiny distance because of

ring

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the ring

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road system, which we were not able to cross.

Such

road systems made local

people

, who prefer walking or cycling,

to

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choose between

make

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a long detour to cross the road or

travel

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travelling

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by car. In conclusion, despite

constructing

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the

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of the

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fast ring

roads

could be helpful for avoiding traffic congestion, it has been increasingly noticed, that it would have a significantly negative impact

to

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on

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pollution and

people

’s

life

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lives

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in the suburbs.