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Having different languages makes it difficult for people of different nationalities to communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world What are the advantages and disadvantages of everyone in the world speaking the same language?

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There is a widely held perception that communication among various nationalities becomes way more difficult because they speak different
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. And it would be way better to have only
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 common
language
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, so
people
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 will not have any difficulties
while
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 talking to
people
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 from other nationalities.
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, there are both pros and cons when we apply it to the real
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. Let's begin by looking at the
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advantages
 of speaking only
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language
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 all over the
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 of the main positives would probably be the fact that no
one
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 barrier. What I mean by
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 is that nowadays, even if
people
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 learn
one
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language
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 for many years they cannot speak it like native speakers.
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 causes a huge problem for
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 if everyone
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 the same
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 from their childhood,
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 problem would disappear. Turning to the other side of the argument every nation's culture is hidden in their
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 leads to the fact that
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, learning new
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 helps
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 to improve their brain activity and makes their outlook wider, which is
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 of the main positive sides of learning new
langauges
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languages
. To put it in a nutshell, all the reasons that were mentioned before lead us to
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 conclusion that speaking
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langauge
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language
 throughout the
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 may have some positive sides, but
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 that
cultures
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 will lose their unique traditions customs and so on.
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, in
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 case, the majority of
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 will stop learning new
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 and
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 will lead to the fact that
people
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 will stop learning other
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 and the history of those
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 which would affect their outlook in a negative way. Personally, I believe that having various
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 around the
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 is important and countries should not change their nation's
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 to
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Be sure to give concrete examples to bolster your arguments. Sharing real-world implications or historical anecdotes can add depth to your discussion.
coherence and cohesion
Transition smoothly between paragraphs with linking phrases that connect not just within paragraphs but across the entire essay.
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Try to delve deeper into the implications of your argument, considering more diverse perspectives for a well-rounded essay.
coherence and cohesion
Your introduction effectively sets the stage for the discussion by presenting a clear thesis.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay benefits from a structured approach, with clear delineation of advantages and disadvantages.
coherence and cohesion
You maintain a coherent argument throughout, showing both sides of the issue which enriches your discussion.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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