These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career seversl times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In
contemporary
era, many people have the tendency to shift from one Add an article
the contemporary
employer
to another more often than before during their course of lives
. It can have various upsides and downsides which will be examined Fix the agreement mistake
life
further
in the essay.
To begin
with, there are numerous positive impacts that come with changing jobs. First and foremost is the growth of an individual's skills at different jobsites
. Correct your spelling
job sites
While
a person
changes his company, he gets opportunity
to improve his expertise in his present set of talents Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
also
he could gain experience in other fields as well. For example
, the
current Correct article usage
apply
employers
generally never tend to change responsibilities
of employees because they do not want to lose a stable employee but at a new workplace the Correct article usage
the responsibilities
employer
tests the employee at different positions to know their adroitness. Nextly
, the people who change their workplaces frequently are able to negotiate their salary better than their present Rephrase
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employer
. For instance
, the present employers
only raise salary to a certain limited extent but the new employer
offers better income offers due to
past achievements of the jobseeker.
On the contrary
, there are some shortcomings of this
trend. First
problem Change the article
The first
arise
when a Change the verb form
arises
person
is not able to concentrate in
one field of interest and Change preposition
on
constant
changing of roles at varied organizations Correct article usage
the constant
cause
a lack of focus. Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
Consequently
, it leads to less
pay Correct quantifier usage
fewer
raise
by Fix the agreement mistake
raises
employer
and chances to rise to higher positions become Fix the agreement mistake
employers
meager
. Change the spelling
meagre
Thus
, new careers may not allow an individual to built
an expertise Change the form of the verb
build
the
field. Change preposition
in the
Finally
, another reason ascribing to the negative side is the inability to maintain connections within the same career when a person
can have an opportunity to create relations in the long run. While
a person
shifts from one job to another he cannot make strong relations with his colleagues and boss because many employers
prefer long term
retention of human resources. Add a hyphen
long-term
Thus
, they do not pay attention to employees who take interest for short term
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short-term
period
. Even they will not readily train an employee properly before a Fix the agreement mistake
periods
probabtion
period of six months or even a year. Correct your spelling
probation
Thus
, a person
could miss certain great options of training which only long term
and patient players achieve in their fields.
Add a hyphen
long-term
To conclude
, there are plethora
of positives and negatives of continuous change Add an article
a plethora
of
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in
employers
. Although
, an individual may better negotiate his pay and new workplace alongwith
chances of learning new skills are provided Correct your spelling
along with
but
some Correct word choice
apply
employers
may identify short terms
players and may never consider them for their job or even some people may not be able to gain expertise in their career.Correct your spelling
short-term
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