The maps below show the city layout of Brisbane between 1975 and the current day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The two given maps illustrate the difference of

Brisbane

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’s layout in 1975 and now, respectively. Through the given maps, it is noticed that how the city of

Brisbane

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has been changed.

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, it is clearly seen that Victoria Bridge is installed on

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Brisbane

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the Brisbane

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River these days,

whereas

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there was no bridge in 1975. Unlike in 1975,

road

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the road

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currently has been removed at the bottom of

Brisbane

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River. In detail, there were houses on the upper-left side of the map in 1975.

However

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, houses were replaced

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with

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apartments these days.

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, the city is planning to construct

park

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a park

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until

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2050 next to apartments. Turning to the details of the bottom of

Brisbane

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river

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River

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, there were solely factories in 1975.

However

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, there

were

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are

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no longer factories nowadays.

Instead

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of factories, there are restaurants on the opposite side of apartments.

Supermarket

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The supermarket

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and hospital

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are

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also

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located next to each other, in front of restaurants.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brisbane with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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The maps below show the city layout of Brisbane between 1975 and the current day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Nowadays some professionals such as doctor, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think hould offer higher salaries?

Please outline your plans and strategies for actively participating in local and international communities throughout the IISMA program, and provide some concrete examples.

Topic: many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Today school should teach thier student how to suvive finacially in the world today t what extent do you agree or disagree

Some experts believe that school it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primaryrather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?