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The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram details the process by which leather products are made for retail. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that there are 3 main steps to
this
 entirely man-made process beginning with
initial
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the initial
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 transportation of the raw material to the
factory
, followed by
preparation
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the preparation
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 and processing of the material, and
finally
 the production of consumer products.
Firstly
, the leather skins from various animals are dried. Subsequent to
this
, they are taken to a
factory
 by truck where they are washed in water and lime. The skins are
then
 soaked in more lime for a period of time before being run through a machine with large rollers that
flattens
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 them out.
Next,
the flattened skins are soaked in tannin, which is composed of water and vegetable matter. They are
then
 polished by another rolling device and taken to another
factory
 by trucks. In
this
factory
, the final products are crafted and available to consumer shops.
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