You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style. You can use this page for any rough work.

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Letter Dear

sor

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sir

os madam I hope

this

letter

find

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you in radiant health and

you

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that you

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are doing well I am writing

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this

letter to you

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because I

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want to explain my condition You know

last

week I bought

this

equipment from your shop market

according to

my old

friend 's

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advise

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but right now I am disappointed about it

cause

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because

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this

computer shut down completely even

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though it 's

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it 's

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its

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screen

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not

turn

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on when I was buying

this

thing I

awared

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awarded

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award

you about I work at home during some months so now I can not work with it It is obvious that without

computer

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a computer

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I can not gain my purpose

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work

this

problem effective my salary and career So I want

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from

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you

refund

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my money or give me

new

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one I hope you find

opportunity

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an opportunity

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to solve

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of the

the

ofthe

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the

problem please contact

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Your

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faithfully Belly Thompson

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Greeting

Consider starting with a clear greeting and using the correct form 'Dear Sir or Madam', to maintain formality.

Structure

Focus on organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a single point: describing the problem, the impact on your work, and your desired outcome.

Language Accuracy

Try to avoid spelling and grammatical mistakes to enhance clarity and professionalism in your letter.

Tone

Use more formal and precise language suitable for a letter of complaint, avoiding informal phrases and contractions where possible.

Closing

Include a clear request for action at the end of the letter, and politely express your hope for a prompt resolution.

Task Achievement

You successfully addressed all parts of the task prompt.

Clarity of request

Your letter communicates the desired outcome clearly - a refund or a replacement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

151 words

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