You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do Write about 150 words in an appropriate format and style. You can use this page for any rough work.

Letter Dear
sor
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sir
os madam I hope
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letter
find
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you in radiant health and
you
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that you
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are doing well I am writing
to
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this
letter to you
I
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because I
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want to explain my condition You know
last
week I bought
this
equipment from your shop market
according to
my old
friend 's
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advise
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but right now I am disappointed about it
cause
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because
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this
computer shut down completely even
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though it 's
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it 's
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screen
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is
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not
turn
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on when I was buying
this
thing I
awared
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awarded
aware
award
you about I work at home during some months so now I can not work with it It is obvious that without
computer
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a computer
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I can not gain my purpose
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work
this
problem effective my salary and career So I want
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from
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you
refund
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my money or give me
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a new
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one I hope you find
opportunity
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an opportunity
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to solve
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of the
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problem please contact
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me
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faithfully Belly Thompson
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Greeting
Consider starting with a clear greeting and using the correct form 'Dear Sir or Madam', to maintain formality.
Structure
Focus on organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, each addressing a single point: describing the problem, the impact on your work, and your desired outcome.
Language Accuracy
Try to avoid spelling and grammatical mistakes to enhance clarity and professionalism in your letter.
Tone
Use more formal and precise language suitable for a letter of complaint, avoiding informal phrases and contractions where possible.
Closing
Include a clear request for action at the end of the letter, and politely express your hope for a prompt resolution.
Task Achievement
You successfully addressed all parts of the task prompt.
Clarity of request
Your letter communicates the desired outcome clearly - a refund or a replacement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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