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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there are different forms of educational activities are provided to
students
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 in
school
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 including some
group
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assignments
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 and
tasks
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 that have to be done on their own. Some argue that working on
school
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tasks
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 with other people is preferable,
while
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 others feel it
more
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is more
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 difficult than completing
tasks
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 individually. I personally find it easier to work it by myself than with a
group
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.
Firstly
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, there are some advantages of working with a
group
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 when
students
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 have to complete some
assignments
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 or
reserch
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research
projects
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. One of the reasons is that a variety of ideas can be generated from the
group
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 members and the project would be more creative than only one's ideas. Another benefit is that discussing with other people can bring a strong sense of bonding and create a better relationship with
other
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fellow
students
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.
For example
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, I
have done
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 a big
reserch
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research
 project at university
last
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 year. It was
a
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 extremely challenging experience for us and it took us 6 months to finish it.
However
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, in the end, we became best friends. We
are still keep
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 in touch and we occasionally meet up and go for dinner.
On the other hand
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, individual
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projects
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 are much more productive in some cases.
This
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 can avoid conflict with others and the
tasks
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 can be done
with
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at
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own
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their own
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 pace not being
destructed
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distracted
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 by having a chat with
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friends in a
group
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.
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the
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a
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 consequence, it is more time
effcient
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efficient
 than
group
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projects
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. For
exmaple
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example
, I
alwasy
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always
 worked on my
assignments
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 on my own. Even though
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 I was invited to join a study
group
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few
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a few
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 times, I chose not to join.
As a result
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, I always submitted my
assignments
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 faster than other classmates. In conclusion, both working on
school
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projects
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 with other
students
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 and individually has some advantages. The main advantage of
group
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project
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 is
that
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bonding
to
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with
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 other
group
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 members.
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However
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 I prefer to work by myself
becaus
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because
 it has more advantages
on
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for
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 my time
mamagement
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management
.

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Argument Balance
Consider balancing the length and depth of discussion between the two sides of the argument to ensure a more even and comprehensive exploration.
Use of Examples
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Introduction & Conclusion
Your introduction and conclusion are clear, providing a good overview and a strong closing to your argument.
Organization
The essay presents a logical flow and good organization, making it easy to follow your arguments.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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