A group of individuals thinks that females should not be permitted in
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policing jobs. I reckon that it is a
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approach towards a gender and might result in the imbalance of power held by
both
genders.
To begin
with, equal employment opportunities should be offered to job seekers and no partiality should be done on the basis of sex. Scientific evidence suggests that
both
men and
women
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.
Also
,
both
genders possess similar intellectual abilities. So, why
women
are not to be considered for a specific career is a questionable thing.
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,
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such
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can assist females to gain power and status in
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society which they lagged
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due to
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gender
.
Consequently
,
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of power will bring about harmony and peace.
Moreover
, females are generally more productive individuals at work. Their contribution could take
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.
For instance
, one study suggests that
women
's productivity is higher as compared to their male counterparts
due to
their multifarious responsibilities at
both
home and work. They have to nourish their kids at home,
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to
this
fact, they finish their work on time.
However
, males do not have
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household chores on them
thus
they tend to
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home.
Furthermore
,
women
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.
Such
kinds of great contributors are required in every profession.
To conclude
,
women
should become part of
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services department so that their skills get recognized in
. Not only it will help them to raise their voice and status in
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society but
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equal society.