The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
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The bar chart provides information about the percentage of five types of schools that Australia's students attended in 1999 for both
male
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and
female
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.
Overall
, it can be seen that skilled vocational degree education and undergraduate diploma had the biggest differences for both male and female pupils,
while
the other four school categories had a lower contrast. In the period given, 90% of male students had a skilled vocational diploma degree, which is a higher proportion compared to other academic certifications,
in contrast
, girls had just 10% of
this
education ratio.
However
, there was just a 20% divergence in how female students gained undergraduate diploma recognition juxtaposed to men's higher academic qualifications.
On the other hand
, the remaining three academic institutions tend to have a similar pattern, with men leading for master's degrees and postgraduate diplomas with 60% and 70%, respectively,
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master's honours than men.
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