The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There is a graph about the three ores, which are
copper
,
nickel
and zinc of mean
value
price per
month
in 2014. The most changeable ore’s
value
is
nickel
. The highest cost of
nickel
was 6 in January.
However
, after a
month
, it had declined from 6 to -3 for 5 months. The lowest
nickel
value
in 2014 was -3 in June. After the
month
, it had been stable for 3 months, but the cost of
nickel
was reduced from -1 to -2 in October. After a
month
, it started to increase from -2 to 1. It sustained from November and December. In January,
copper
and zinc prices were 2 and 1. There is a difference between
copper
and zinc’s price trend. In February, zinc’s
value
increased from 1 to 3.
On the contrary
, another one decreased from 2 to 1. The 3 common points between two ores. First of all, their values displayed a decreasing trend from February to June. The second point is that they were stable
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
show examples
from June to September. The
last
one is that the
value
trends of
copper
and zinc increased after October.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, value, month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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