the chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011

the chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011
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the bar chart compares the number of male and female pupils enrolling in six different art-relevant fields at a university in the UK in 2011.
Overall
, female students outnumbered males in most subjects except for Art and Design. Communication and Media studies had the highest female enrollments,
while
English language and Literature attracted most male students, and both were popular choices. The top three programs saw quite similar patterns. Communication and Media Study had the highest number of female students.
This
closely resembled the figures in English language and Literature, where approximately 250 females pursued the subject, exceeding male enlistment by 30. In third place, Linguistics had approximately 235 females and 185 males.
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