The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
The bar graph compares the gender distribution of
students
in six art-related programs at a UK university in 2011.
Overall
, female students
outnumbered males in most subjects, except for Art & Design.
Communication and Media Study
had
the highest female Fix the agreement mistake
Studies
enrollments
, while
English
language & Literature attracted the most male pupils, and both were popular choices.
The number of female enrollments
varied across the fields, ranging from around 120 students
to 270 students
. Communication & Media Study had the highest enrollment with approximately 270 female students
. English language & Literature closely
followed Add a missing verb
were closely
with
250 females, and Linguistics had around 240 female pupils. The figures for female Change preposition
by
enrollments
in the remaining three fields showed slight variations, from 150 persons in Philosophy, Art & Design to 125 in History & Archeology.
Male enrollments
were significantly lower compared to their female counterparts. English language & Literature had the highest number of males, with approximately 225 enlistment
.
In Linguistics, Communication & Media Study, and Art & Design, the figures ranged from around 180 to 210 male enlistment. Philosophy Change to a plural noun
enlistments
and
History & Archeology had a relatively low enrollment of only 50-75 male Correct word choice
apply
students
, making them the only subjects with fewer than 100 male pupils.Submitted by qphuongluong.3112 on
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