The line graphs show the size of the ozone hole in Antarctic and three types of damaging gases that damage the Antarctic ozone from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graphs show the size of the ozone hole in Antarctic and three types of damaging gases that damage the Antarctic ozone from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graphs illustrate how the
hole
in the ozone layer changed in Antarctica,
while
also
outlining how much emissions there were from three different types of damaging gasses over a 20-year time period.
Overall
, the
hole
in the ozone layer continued to gradually expand,
while
CFC-11 decreased and CFC-12 and N20 both increased. One notable observation is that the size of the
hole
in the ozone layer continues to grow bigger. The size was
initially
only about 400 square kilometres
during
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1980.
In addition
to
this
, the
hole
slightly decreased during 1990 and 1993 to approximately 1200 square kilometres.
Thereafter
, the size expanded significantly to about 3700 square kilometres.
Furthermore
,
gas
types B and C gradually increased,
while
gas
type A decreased.
Moreover
,
gas
type
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types
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B and C are positively correlated as both
inceased
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decreased
,
however
, N20 only started to be released during 1990. During 1980,
gas
type A was the largest emissioned
gas
at about 70 million tonnes, which decreased to the least at 7 million tonnes during 2000.
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