The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer.

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer.
The two different charts indicate information concerning the statistics about working time and
stress
levels among occupations in eight groups (Writers, Doctors, Chefs, etc). Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the men had the highest worked
hours
per week
while
the
stress
rate was not the biggest among all the different jobs. A cursory glance at the data reveals that the businessmen worked an average of 70
hours
per week
in contrast
, the
stress
level was 11%.
Next,
movie producers worked 60
hours
and the
stress
level accounted for 18%. Doctors worked approximately 50
hours
writers were followed by doctors
more
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than 40
hours
and their
stress
levels were more than three-quarters, and 8%, respectively. A more detailed look at the graph reveals that despite the smallest working time (less than 30
hours
), lecturers'
stress
level had the highest
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of 25%.
Moreover
, chefs, lawyers, and programmers worked 30, 35, and 40
hours
, and the
stress
levels showed similar rates accounting for 10%, 8%, and 5%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stress, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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