The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer.
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The two different charts indicate information concerning the statistics about working time and
stress
levels among occupations in eight groups (Writers, Doctors, Chefs, etc).
Looking at the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the men had the highest worked hours
per week while
the stress
rate was not the biggest among all the different jobs.
A cursory glance at the data reveals that the businessmen worked an average of 70 hours
per week in contrast
, the stress
level was 11%. Next,
movie producers worked 60 hours
and the stress
level accounted for 18%. Doctors worked approximately 50 hours
writers were followed by doctors more
than 40 Change preposition
with more
hours
and their stress
levels were more than three-quarters, and 8%, respectively.
A more detailed look at the graph reveals that despite the smallest working time (less than 30 hours
), lecturers' stress
level had the highest consisted
of 25%. Wrong verb form
consisting
Moreover
, chefs, lawyers, and programmers worked 30, 35, and 40 hours
, and the stress
levels showed similar rates accounting for 10%, 8%, and 5%, respectively.Submitted by wowoo04066 on
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