The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer.
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The two different charts indicate information concerning the statistics about working time and
stress
levels among occupations in eight groups (Writers, Doctors, Chefs, etc).
Looking at the Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the men had the highest worked Linking Words
hours
per week Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
stress
rate was not the biggest among all the different jobs.
A cursory glance at the data reveals that the businessmen worked an average of 70 Use synonyms
hours
per week Use synonyms
in contrast
, the Linking Words
stress
level was 11%. Use synonyms
Next,
movie producers worked 60 Linking Words
hours
and the Use synonyms
stress
level accounted for 18%. Doctors worked approximately 50 Use synonyms
hours
writers were followed by doctors Use synonyms
more
than 40 Change preposition
with more
hours
and their Use synonyms
stress
levels were more than three-quarters, and 8%, respectively.
A more detailed look at the graph reveals that despite the smallest working time (less than 30 Use synonyms
hours
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stress
level had the highest Use synonyms
consisted
of 25%. Wrong verb form
consisting
Moreover
, chefs, lawyers, and programmers worked 30, 35, and 40 Linking Words
hours
, and the Use synonyms
stress
levels showed similar rates accounting for 10%, 8%, and 5%, respectively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stress, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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