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The graph below shows the percentage of female students on four different courses at one university from 1970 to 2015

The graph below shows the percentage of female students on four different courses at one university from 1970 to 2015
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The provided line graph offers a comparative analysis of the percentage of female
students
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 enrolled in four different academic fields—computer
science
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,
physics
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,
medicine
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, and law—over a period of 45 years, from 1970 to 2015.
Overall
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, the data depicts a general upward trend in the percentage of female
students
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 in the disciplines of
physics
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,
medicine
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, and law, with the latter showing a particularly remarkable rise to almost complete representation by the end of the period. Computer
science
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,
however
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, presents an anomaly with a peak followed by a pronounced decline. In 1970,
law
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the law
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 recorded the smallest proportion of female
students
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, under 10%, but
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 figure experienced a swift and substantial increase, surpassing all other subjects by 1975. The trend continued, culminating in near-total female representation in law by 2015.
Medicine
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 and
physics
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 began with similar percentages, around 25% for
medicine
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 and slightly above for
physics
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.
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,
medicine
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 saw a steeper ascent, overtaking
physics
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 by 1990 and progressing to just under 85% by the end of the timeframe.
Physics
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 followed a steadier route, reaching roughly 80%.
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, computer
science
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 demonstrated a unique pattern; starting at about 25%, it saw a steep climb until it reached a peak at approximately 75% in the late 1980s.
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 was followed by a dramatic downturn, with percentages falling to just over the initial value by 2015. The data clearly illustrates not only the increasing inclination of female
students
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 towards these subjects but
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 the volatility in the field of computer
science
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, suggesting shifting societal or industry trends over the 45-year span.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, science, physics, medicine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • male-dominated
  • steady
  • fluctuating
  • popularity
  • influence
  • societal changes
  • advocacy
  • gender equality
  • enrollment
  • academic disciplines
  • declines
  • plateau phases
  • gender diversity
  • inclusion
  • educational sector
  • workforce
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