The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer.

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress level amongs professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or coollage lecurer.
The bar chart and pie chart illustrate the number of
work
hours
per week and the proportion of
stress
among eight different occupations.
Overall
, it can be seen that businessmen spend their lifetime working the most,
while
a majority of lecturers are suffering from illness caused by
stress
. In a week, the businessmen dedicate their time to
work
almost 70
hours
. Movie producers came second place with 60
hours
. Only roughly 25
hours
were spent by lecturers. The other jobs
work
less than 60
hours
a week and are different by 5
hours
.
On the other hand
, the lecturers seem to get
stress
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stressed
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more than other jobs, which occupy 25%. Followed by entertainment producers and doctors at 18% and 15% respectively. Chefs and lawyers are likely to have equal
stress
from their
work
which is represented at 8%.
However
, programmers are affected by
stress
the least which is only 5%.
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