The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a graph illustrating the process of manufacturing
leather
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products. It is evident from the information provided that producing
leather
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constitutes four primary stages at the
factory
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. The first
stage
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of producing
leather
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entails gathering raw materials from animals' skin. They should be dried before loading on trucks and sending them to the
factory
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. In the
factory
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, after washing animals' skin with water and lime, they are
then
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soaked in lime to be prepared for the flattening
stage
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, which is done with the help of enormous industrial machines. Having flatted them, they are soaked in tannin comprised of water
as well as
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vegetable matter for the sake of colouring them. The polished and coloured stuff is entered to the final
stage
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of producing
leather
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. The
last
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stage
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constitutes polishing them to be smooth, before sending them by Lorries to the second
factory
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. In the second
factory
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,
however
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, common goods like
leather
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bags, shoes and other stuff are produced and sold in markets.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words leather, factory, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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