The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a graph illustrating the process of manufacturing
leather
products. It is evident from the information provided that producing leather
constitutes four primary stages at the factory
.
The first stage
of producing leather
entails gathering raw materials from animals' skin. They should be dried before loading on trucks and sending them to the factory
. In the factory
, after washing animals' skin with water and lime, they are then
soaked in lime to be prepared for the flattening stage
, which is done with the help of enormous industrial machines. Having flatted them, they are soaked in tannin comprised of water as well as
vegetable matter for the sake of colouring them. The polished and coloured stuff is entered to the final stage
of producing leather
. The last
stage
constitutes polishing them to be smooth, before sending them by Lorries to the second factory
.
In the second factory
, however
, common goods like leather
bags, shoes and other stuff are produced and sold in markets.Submitted by golriiz23 on
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