The diagram below show how leather goods are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a graph illustrating the process of manufacturing
leather
products. It is evident from the information provided that producing Use synonyms
leather
constitutes four primary stages at the Use synonyms
factory
.
The first Use synonyms
stage
of producing Use synonyms
leather
entails gathering raw materials from animals' skin. They should be dried before loading on trucks and sending them to the Use synonyms
factory
. In the Use synonyms
factory
, after washing animals' skin with water and lime, they are Use synonyms
then
soaked in lime to be prepared for the flattening Linking Words
stage
, which is done with the help of enormous industrial machines. Having flatted them, they are soaked in tannin comprised of water Use synonyms
as well as
vegetable matter for the sake of colouring them. The polished and coloured stuff is entered to the final Linking Words
stage
of producing Use synonyms
leather
. The Use synonyms
last
Linking Words
stage
constitutes polishing them to be smooth, before sending them by Lorries to the second Use synonyms
factory
.
In the second Use synonyms
factory
, Use synonyms
however
, common goods like Linking Words
leather
bags, shoes and other stuff are produced and sold in markets.Use synonyms
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