You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish you complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter -Say who you are -Give details about the accident -Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents. Write at least 150 words. You do Not need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Georgiana Liu living near one of your branches in downtown Stouffville. I am writing to bring to your attention the accident

happened

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that happened

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to me inside your supermarket

last

Sunday afternoon. As usual, I was there to buy some groceries. When I passed through the entrance of the washroom, I suddenly fell slip over the floor cleaner came from the mop. It could be worse if I didn’t protect my neck and head with my hands. Fortunately, I just got small bruising on my rear end from

this

accident. Your staff

had

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apologized to me and

taken

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took

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me to the hospital.

However

, I am still in a state of shock because I can’t imagine how it could be worse if

this

happened to an elder

instead

of me. I would be grateful if your staff could take

an

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apply

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action to prevent

this

kind of

accidents

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accident

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from happening again by

settling

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setting

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a warning sign every time they clean the floor. I trust that you will address

this

concern as soon as possible.

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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faithfully, Georgiana Liu