The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
different types of Change the verb form
illustrate
energy
resources from a specific nation, in 1985 and 2003.
Overall
, oil is the most utilized type of energy
in both periods while
renewable energy
is
Verb problem
apply
present
the lowest percentage Replace the word
presents
on
both years.
Change preposition
in
Oil based
Add a hyphen
Oil-based
energy
represented 52% of the total in 1985, being the most generated energy
in the country, continuing to lead in 2003, with 39%. In the 80's, nuclear energy
occupied the second most generated energy
with 22%. However
, natural gas took over its place in 2003, growing 10% over 18 years. In 2003, nuclear energy
made up 17% while
natural gas percentage was 23%.
It is possible to clearly observe that the percetage
of hydrogen Correct your spelling
percentage
energy
remained the same in both years. In 1985 renewable energy
was only 1%. However
, renewable resources grew 3% in 2003 when compared to 1985. Similarly
, coal-based energy
percentage rose from 8% to 13% being the fourth most comsumed
type of Correct your spelling
consumed
energy
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