The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of who watched reality and game shows in men and women and 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and 45+ age groups in Australia.

The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of who watched reality and game shows in men and women and 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and 45+ age groups in Australia.
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The two bar graphs show information about the percentage of four
age
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groups
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and both genders that spend their time on screen in
reality
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and game shows.
Overall
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, it can be seen that females spend more time watching
reality
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shows,
while
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males consider game performances. There was
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a relatively similar difference in
age
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groups
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between the two
groups
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of shows.
To begin
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with, the number of women who allocated their leisure time to watching
reality
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shows was 70%;
this
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number was double that of men.
In addition
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, there was a gradual increase throughout the
age
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group, starting at exactly half for teenagers and reaching around 70% for adults. In terms of game shows, there was a similar portion for both genders, around 60% for males and a little lower for females; there was
also
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less juxtaposed to adolescence, which reached 10% higher. Compared to
reality
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, the patterns of
age
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groups
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fluctuated.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, groups, reality with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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