The diagram below shows how newspapers are recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram shows all the steps in recycling

newspapers

, and it divides

this

process

into a total of seven steps.

Overall

, it is clearly seen that recycling

newspapers

the

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process

that can be recycled and used repeatedly. In detail, after people read

newspapers

, they recycle those

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recycle bins. Recycling facilities take

newspapers

out from recycle bins, and

then

sorting and baling processes are carried out afterwards.

After

this

process

, two steps are

happened

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done

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at the same time with slurry which is a muddy combination of paper and water: screening and whitening.

Screening

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The screening

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process

means that facilities

filtered

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filter

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glue, staples and metals from

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the newspaper

a newspaper

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newspaper

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newspapers

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In addition

, the

process

that

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hydrogen

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which hydrogen

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peroxide

added

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is added

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is called whitening. After

screening

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the screening

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and whitening processes have been completed,

slurry

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the slurry

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will be converted into sheets for pressing out water with

press

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a press

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machine.

Cutter

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A cutter

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is used as a means to size sheets. After all these processes have occurred, they will bail

newspapers

again, and

then

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they

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will

deliver

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be delivered

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to customers again.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

166 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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The diagram below shows how newspapers are recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

New forms of money are becoming extremely popular nowadays. Is this a positive development or adding risk to the system? Should new money technology face greater regulation and scrutiny?

The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? To reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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