First impression is important. Some people think doing well in an interview is key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The essential things in an
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are initial attitude and appearance which can lead a better vacancies. In the
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opinion decidedly agree, there are several reasons why it can be
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to determine someone because
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oriented. When folks attend a formal event
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interview
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the human resources team. Showing a
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clothes means respect to the citizens
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meet with.
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, in 2023 the writer applied
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opportunity
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from various
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to direct
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interview
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because of my perseverance
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evidence of how important fashion can affect our vibe. How to transfer our knowledge through communication is key
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in job
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interview
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. Someone who can explain their capability of work with a
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incline to get great exposure in
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, in 2023 the writer explained her capability in
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scientiest
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not only spoke but
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she created before
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makes
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of her work.
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, folk who can deliver their insight efficiently
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learn
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a
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positive feedback sooner or later on job
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results. In conclusion, either appearance or communication is a
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to produce an excellent output
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occupation. Society must take responsibility
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on the event they come in.
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Make sure your introduction clearly presents your opinion on the topic. You've done a good job, but it could be clearer for the reader.
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Your examples are relevant and help illustrate your points. Consider adding more supporting information to make your arguments even stronger.
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Maintain a formal style throughout your essay. Avoid using informal language and ensure that your essay adheres to formal writing conventions.
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You have successfully addressed the prompt by giving a clear opinion and supporting it throughout the essay.

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