First impression is important. Some people think doing well in an interview is key to securing a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The essential things in an
interview
are initial attitude and appearance which can lead a better vacancies. In the writer
opinion decidedly agree, there are several reasons why it can be Change noun form
writer's
advantegous
.
The way of dress is one of the easiest Correct your spelling
advantageous
way
to determine someone because Change to a plural noun
ways
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
visual
oriented. When folks attend a formal event Change the adjective
visually
such
as job
Correct article usage
a job
interview
, definitedly
they Correct your spelling
definitely
are use
a Change the verb form
are using
pairs
of formal Correct the article-noun agreement
pair
uniform
to make well impress Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
from
the human resources team. Showing a Change preposition
apply
well
clothes means respect to the citizens Change the adverb
good
whom
meet with. Change the pronoun
who
For instance
, in 2023 the writer applied internship
Change preposition
for internship
opportunity
from various Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
company
, Fix the agreement mistake
companies
then
I got a call Correct word choice
and then
by
one of them and Change preposition
from
continue
to direct Wrong verb form
continued
interview
. Fix the agreement mistake
interviews
Further
, I
arrived there, I Rephrase
when I
got
Verb problem
was
compliment
because of my perseverance Wrong verb form
complimented
then
the interview
done
smoothly. Add a missing verb
was done
That is
the
evidence of how important fashion can affect our vibe.
How to transfer our knowledge through communication is key Correct article usage
apply
of
success since words can bring potential gain for everything Change preposition
to
particularly
in job Add the comma(s)
, particularly
interview
. Someone who can explain their capability of work with a Fix the agreement mistake
interviews
well structured
incline to get great exposure in Add a hyphen
well-structured
workforce
. Add an article
the workforce
For example
, in 2023 the writer explained her capability in data
process to Correct article usage
the data
applied
Correct article usage
the applied
data
Correct article usage
a data
scientiest
internship position Correct your spelling
scientist
scientists
thus
not only spoke but also
showed the project that was
she created before Unnecessary verb
apply
that
makes Correct pronoun usage
which
a
strong Correct article usage
apply
prove
of her work. Replace the word
proof
In other words
, folk who can deliver their insight efficiently lean
Correct your spelling
learn
a
positive feedback sooner or later on job Remove the article
apply
interview
results.
In conclusion, either appearance or communication is a keypoint
Correct your spelling
key point
how
to produce an excellent output Change preposition
in how
especially
in terms of finding Add the comma(s)
, especially
a
occupation. Society must take responsibility Change the article
an
of
Change preposition
for
this
task to suit the clothes depend
on the event they come in.Change the form of the verb
depending
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task achievement
Make sure your introduction clearly presents your opinion on the topic. You've done a good job, but it could be clearer for the reader.
task achievement
Your examples are relevant and help illustrate your points. Consider adding more supporting information to make your arguments even stronger.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a formal style throughout your essay. Avoid using informal language and ensure that your essay adheres to formal writing conventions.
coherence cohesion
Work on linking your ideas more smoothly. Transition words and phrases can help guide the reader through your argument in a more coherent manner.
coherence cohesion
Revise your essay for uniform verb tense usage to enhance clarity and improve the formal tone of your writing.
coherence cohesion
Your examples effectively support your argument, making your points more convincing.
coherence cohesion
The structure of your essay is logical, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
task achievement
You have successfully addressed the prompt by giving a clear opinion and supporting it throughout the essay.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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