The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagram displays statistics about the amount of calories citizens consumed in several countries in 1975 and 2000. In general, all of these land, they spent calorie much more in 2000 compared with another year. It is clear from the chart that
by comparison
in 1975, the figures
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China, Indonesia, and Nigeria increased higher than others in 2000.
For instance
, in 1975 the amount of calories was about 2,000, and in the year 2000, Nigeria consumed approximately 2,700 and China was approaching the 3,000 mark. We can see the gap between nations that were highest and lowest in terms of consumption was 700 to 1,000.
While
in India, Brazil, Pakistan and Bangladesh the gap was 250 to 500,
for example
, in Bangladesh and Pakistan, intake only rose by around 250 and 500 in Brazil.
Consequently
, the ranking of the countries by calorie consumption changed over the period and China overtook Brazil to become the country where most calories consumed.
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