The diagram illustrates the process of production sugar in a specific plant (sugar cane).

The following illustration depicts the manufacturing process of

sugar

.

Overall

, there are 7 steps of manufacturing

sugar

canes

it starts with growing those

sugar

canes

and ends with drying and cooling the ready

sugar

. The

sugar

canes

are harvested after at least a year. The maximum amount of time that the

sugar

canes

are growing is a year and a half

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after the

canes

are harvested. There are 2 ways of harvesting the first one is with the help of machines,

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second one is manual. Afterwards, the harvested

canes

are crushed and their

juice

is collected in a tray.

Then

that

juice

is purified through a limestone filter. After purifying the

juice

will be heated on gas and a part of that

juice

will be evaporated,

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the other part will stay in a container and it will turn into syrup.

Then

that syrup is put in a centrifuge, and by turning them the

sugar

crystals will be separated from

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. And

finally

, at the

last

step

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sugar

will be collected in a huge cylindrical container in order to dry and cool.