The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reportion the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the
population
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in four SEA countries comprising the
Phillippines
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, Malaysia,
Thailand
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and
Indonesia
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with ten-year intervals from 1970 to 2020 and projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Malaysia at the beginning has the most
population
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compared to others
while
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Indonesia
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is the lowest.
However
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, with a prediction the
Phillippines
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population
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reach a peak and
Thailand
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will be the
last
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place. The
Phillippines
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started the period in 1970 at well over 30%,
then
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continuously grew to under 50% in 1990. There was a dramatic rise from 1990 to 2020 and it is still going up to just over 80% in 2040. Malaysia came second place with 30% before fluctuating throughout the year 1970 to 2010 which occupied 40%,
then
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slightly increased to roughly 50% in 2020. The growth will steadily rise to 55%
at the end
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of the period. Both
Thailand
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and
Indonesia
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had the same trajectory between 1970 to 1990, they were at nearly 30% and 25% respectively. Afterwards, the
population
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in
Thailand
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hovered at 30% before rising up to almost 50% in 2040.
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, from 1990 to 2020,
Indonesia
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's
population
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surged and it will overcome
Thailand
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and The
Phillippines
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and jump to 60%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, phillippines, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
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