You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given charts illustrate the

percentages

employees

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of employees

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in the age group

fromm

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from

60-64,

seperated

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separated

by

genders

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gender

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, in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

Overall

, male

workers

in the age group of 60 and over had

a much higher

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a much higher percentage

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percentages

than

female

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females

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, with the most significant, being

Japan

in 1970, having the highest

percents

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percentage

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of

workers

.

Meanwhile

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women had a much lesser percentage of

workers

, with Belgium having the lowest. In 1970, saw the highest

percentages

of male employees across all four countries, with

Japan

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Japan's

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percentage dominating the others at 84%,

while

Australia,

USA

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the USA

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and

Beigium

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Belgium

at 74, 73 and 79, respectively.

However

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in 2000, they

experiences

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a great

declined

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decline

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in employees across the chart, with Belgium only having 19% in 2000.

While

the other three countries only saw declinement from 76% for

Japan

and 47% for Australia.

On the other hand

, female

workers

in both years saw relatively minor changes in number.

Japan

also

having

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had

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the highest counts for both years, with America seconding, only dropping slightly in 2000. Australia had

a

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apply

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relatively

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percentages

in both 1970 and 2000 but it never saw

percentages

as low as Belgium only having 8% and 7% in

bot

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both

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years respectively.