The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom last year. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom last year. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The top items, i.e. goods and services, sold online in
Australia
,
Canada
, and the United Kingdom
last
year are illustrated by the bar chart below. The three most items purchased in all countries are books, computer equipment, and music, dominantly bought by The United Kingdom shown by the blue chart. It was followed by
Canada
and
Australia
presented by the red and yellow chart, respectively. The United Kingdom was the nation with the most purchases in all commodities
last
year, except for financial services and toys.
Canada
,
on the other hand
, was least interested in buying food and drink.
Whereas
Australia
nearly bought zero toys. Books had the highest
overall
sales
with over 60% bought in the UK and over 40% bought in
Australia
and
Canada
. Computer components were sold for over 50% in the UK and slightly over the
sales
of
literatures
Change the wording
literature
kinds of literature
pieces of literature
works of literature
show examples
in
Australia
and
Canada
. Music has the highest
sales
in the UK, overtaking the
sales
of books.
However
,
sales
in
Australia
and
Canada
were not as high, only slightly below 40% of consumers bought it online
last
year.
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