Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: •Introduce yourself •Explain what the problems is •Suggest solutions to the problem You do not need to write any addresses
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about too much noise during renovation which is going in
my street.
Allow Change preposition
on in
to
explain Correct pronoun usage
me to
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to me
me
about myself, my name is Harjeet Kaur and living Correct pronoun usage
you
in
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on
this
street from
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for
last
two years. Despite Correct article usage
the last
this
, I am really happy for
your Change preposition
about
work
because you are doing well to
repairing old things. Unfortunately, Change preposition
in
due to
this
work
, I have to face problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
becuase
the machines create a lot of noise which Correct your spelling
because
work
at late night. Correct subject-verb agreement
works
Also
, I am student
and doing Add an article
a student
part-time
job with it so Add an article
the part-time
a part-time
i want
to need rest Verb problem
I
for
rejuvenate myself.
To resolve Change preposition
to
this
problem, if you would give suggestion
to them, do Correct article usage
a suggestion
work
in morning
time which Correct article usage
the morning
produce
Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
extremely
noise. Change the word
extreme
Along with
this
, people of
society will Change preposition
in
better
because the children do not Add a missing verb
be better
take
Verb problem
get
sleep
Correct determiner usage
enough sleep
due to
it. I will be waiting for a good response from you.
Thank you,
yours faithfully,
Harjeet.Submitted by harmanpreetkang20 on
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Tone
Try to maintain a more formal tone throughout your letter for consistency and appropriateness to the context of a complaint letter to the council.
Structure
Work on structuring your letter more clearly, with distinct paragraphs for introduction, explanation of the problem, and suggesting solutions.
Grammar
Consider proofreading your letter to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure for better clarity and professionalism.
Content
To enhance your letter, specifically detail how the noise affects your daily routine and suggest practical solutions with clear, respectful requests to the council.
Task Response
You have clearly identified the purpose of your letter and attempted to address all parts of the task.
Personal Touch
Your personal situation is described, which adds relevance and urgency to the complaint.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite