The first chart below shows the energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows the energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following illustrations depict the
energy
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consumption in an average Australian household and the percentage of greenhouse gas
emissions
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that those appliances produce.
Overall
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, Australians use the majority of
the
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energy
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on
the
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heating and the least
amount
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of
energy
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on cooling. The
amount
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of greenhouse gas
emissions
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is produced because of water heating unlike and the least
amount
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of the
emissions
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that is
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produced from cooling. The biggest fraction of the used
energy
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is from heating, it made up almost half of the pie chart. Water heating consumes a lot of
energy
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, too. Australian people spend the least
amount
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of
energy
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on cooling, lighting and refrigeration
according to
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the pie chart. The highest percentage of greenhouse gas
emissions
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is produced by water heating and other appliances. Heating and refrigeration result in almost the same percentage of
emmisions
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emissions
which is around 15%. Cooling and lighting together make up only
one tenth
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of the pie chart.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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