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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data illustrate information about the percentage of female school-leavers going into higher education in many countries between 1980 and 2015
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, the UK and the USA and South
Korea
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 and France experienced an upward trend,
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 Australia showed the same percentage during the period. In South
Korea
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, the percentage almost doubled. In 1980, in the UK school-leavers
rate
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 was approximately 34%. In the USA it
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 was approximately 39%. In Australia, it
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 was approximately 59%. In South
Korea
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, it
rate
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 was approximately 15%. In France, it
rate
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 was 50%. In 2015, in the UK school-leavers
rate
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 rose significantly reaching around 55%. In the USA it
rate
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 grew considerably reaching around 59%. In Australia, it had the same
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 in 1980. In South
Korea
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, it increased dramatically to around 30%. In France rose slightly reaching almost 55%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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