The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The information about the proportion of individuals of various ages in the UK who used
internet
services on daily
basis from 2003-2006 is represented by the given bar graph. The information is calibrated in the form of percentages.
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a daily
Overall
, the most striking feature of the chart is that young adults upto
24 Correct your spelling
up to
years
old are the maximum internet
users in the given years
, while
the elderly above 65 years
old seems
least interested in Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
the
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internet
technology.
To begin
, youngsters upto
24 Correct your spelling
up to
years
old shared similar proportions(80%) in internet
usage in the years
2003 and 2004, whilst in the next year, the internet
popularity among this
age group raised
by 20%. For 25-Verb problem
rose
44
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44-year-olds
years
old, internet
users ranges
from a low of 50% in 2003 to a high of 80% in 2006, with 60% and 70% users in between. Adults from 45-54 Change the verb form
range
years
old represented a slightly higher percentage of internet
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years
than the former age group: 60% in 2003, 70% in 2004, 75% in 2005 and 80% in 2006.
With respect to 55-64 years
old
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internet
services used for the first two years
have a negligible difference of approximately 3% whereas
in the last
two years
a considerable difference of 18% can be noticed. Add a comma
years,
However
, least
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the least
internet
customers(less than 20%) were noted in the above 65 years
old age group in the last
three years
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