The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
population
, birth
rate
, and death rate
of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. Overall
, the population
showed an upward trend while
the birth
and death rates experienced a minor fluctuation.
First,
the population
size was 2 million in the beginning. After reaching 10 million in 1750, it then
dropped to about 3 million in 1800. However
, the population
recovered its figure after 50 years
. Subsequently
, it grew dramatically throughout the given timeframe.
In terms of the birth
rate
, it reached its peak at 40% in 1750 and levelled out for 50 years
. Next,
it dropped by 8% in 1850 and stood as it did for another 50 years
. In 1950, it experienced a dip to 22% and rose back to 34% in 2000. Lastly
, the death rate
showed a similar trend to the birth
rate
except for the last
50 years
. It levelled out at 20% from 1950 to 2000.Submitted by aahhyu111 on
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