The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
population
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birth
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rate
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rate
of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
population
showed an upward trend Use synonyms
while
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birth
and death rates experienced a minor fluctuation.
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First,
the Linking Words
population
size was 2 million in the beginning. After reaching 10 million in 1750, it Use synonyms
then
dropped to about 3 million in 1800. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
population
recovered its figure after 50 Use synonyms
years
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Subsequently
, it grew dramatically throughout the given timeframe.
In terms of the Linking Words
birth
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rate
, it reached its peak at 40% in 1750 and levelled out for 50 Use synonyms
years
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Next,
it dropped by 8% in 1850 and stood as it did for another 50 Linking Words
years
. In 1950, it experienced a dip to 22% and rose back to 34% in 2000. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the death Linking Words
rate
showed a similar trend to the Use synonyms
birth
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rate
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last
50 Linking Words
years
. It levelled out at 20% from 1950 to 2000.Use synonyms
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