The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
population
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,
birth
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rate
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, and death
rate
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of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000.
Overall
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, the
population
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showed an upward trend
while
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the
birth
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and death rates experienced a minor fluctuation.
First,
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the
population
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size was 2 million in the beginning. After reaching 10 million in 1750, it
then
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dropped to about 3 million in 1800.
However
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, the
population
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recovered its figure after 50
years
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.
Subsequently
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, it grew dramatically throughout the given timeframe. In terms of the
birth
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rate
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, it reached its peak at 40% in 1750 and levelled out for 50
years
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.
Next,
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it dropped by 8% in 1850 and stood as it did for another 50
years
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. In 1950, it experienced a dip to 22% and rose back to 34% in 2000.
Lastly
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, the death
rate
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showed a similar trend to the
birth
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rate
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except for the
last
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50
years
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. It levelled out at 20% from 1950 to 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, birth, rate, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • stabilize
  • steep
  • advancements
  • notable
  • shift
  • norms
  • impact
  • critical factor
  • relatively stable
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