The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of individuals from the US donating money to charitable
organization
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organizations
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in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the people between the
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age
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ages
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of 36 and 50 donated the most money,
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the
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group 18 to 25 paid less than others. Meanwhile, in 1990, people below 50 donated more money,
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, an opposite trend was seen in 2010, where groups over 50 made significant
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contributions
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.
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with, in 1990 the amount of donations showed
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increase from
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18 to 50 and reached a peak of around 41% in the
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group of 36 to 50 years. And, with
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in
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beyond 50 years the amount of contributions towards charitable purposes showed a mild decline.
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, in 2010 the pattern followed the same trend as in 1990 and the percentage of charity rose continuously from
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18 to 65 , but in comparison to 1990 the high level of contributions was reached in the
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group of 51-65 and
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, similar to 1990, there was a bit of decline.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charitable giving
  • demographic analysis
  • economic factors
  • social awareness
  • technological advancements
  • societal values
  • donation patterns
  • functioning and effectiveness
  • speculate
  • future trends
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